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-Hello, we are contacting you because AyaNova version 8 has been released.
+We are excited to announce the release of AyaNova version 8!
 
 AyaNova 8 is a completely new version of AyaNova with many new features and improvements.
 
 
-Changes from AyaNova 7
+What's new?
 
-We have a brief summary of the major changes from AyaNova 7 here:
+We have an overview of the major changes from AyaNova 7 here:
 https://ayanova.com/docs/ay-start-changes-from-v7/
 
 
-Hosted service
+AyaNova service now available
 
-With the release of AyaNova 8 we are excited to also announce our new AyaNova as a service option in addition to the traditional self-installed option.
+We are also excited to announce AyaNova is now available as a service in addition to the self-installed option you're familiar with now.
 If you have been considering reducing your in-house hardware and software requirements, hosted AyaNova may be a good match for you.
 
 
 Can I try it before upgrading?
 
-Yes!  AyaNova 8 is different software from AyaNova 7 and we encourage you to try it out fully and familiarize yourself and your staff with it before upgrading.
-We have a guided tour that will take you through that process here:
+Yes!  AyaNova 8 is different software from AyaNova 7 and you will want to try it out fully and familiarize yourself and your staff with it before upgrading.
+We have a guided tour that will take you through that process in the shortest time possible here:
 https://ayanova.com/docs/tour-bootstrap-intro/
 
 
 Do I have to upgrade now?
 
-While we recommend upgrading to AyaNova 8 as soon as possible we understand not everyone will be able to use AyaNova 8 right away 
+While we recommend upgrading to AyaNova 8 as soon as possible we understand not everyone will be able to use AyaNova 8 right away
 and we will continue to support AyaNova 7 as long as it's practical to do so.
-Our existing AyaNova 7 web content and forum are still available, select "AyaNova 7 content" from the "Resources" menu option on our website
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+Our existing AyaNova 7 web content and forum are still available - select "AyaNova 7 content" from the "Resources" menu option on our website:
 https://www.ayanova.com
 
 
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 AyaNova 8 is a major release upgrade and not a free upgrade with an AyaNova 7 subscription however:
 
-- overall pricing has been *reduced* as part of the licensing simplification changes https://www.ayanova.com/r/pricing.htm
+- overall pricing has been *reduced* for most as part of the licensing simplification changes https://www.ayanova.com/r/pricing.htm
 - discounts are available for existing AyaNova 7 subscribers, contact us when ready to purchase for your discount coupon
 - previously optional add-on's are now included now with AyaNova 8 further reducing the cost
 
 
+Questions?
+
+As always if you have any questions please reach out to our support department
+https://contact.ayanova.com/contact
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